http://nothawkingbird.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] nothawkingbird.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hawkeyekate 2008-02-03 04:38 am (UTC)

Her pulse was erratic and her breathing was fast and shallow.

She tried to nod, and swallow. She whispered, trying to meet their eyes, "Have to stay awake."

Can't be that bad, not dying. Just a bad wound. Patriot got one worse than this. Right?
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